How to clean up a messy room to be comfortable in
simple methods
If you have a party
absolutely after the party your room will be messy and dirty but don’t worry,
just follow my simple methods to clean up messy room after the party. First of
all, prepare some equipment that you need to clean up the rubbish such as
broom, scoop, duster, vacuum cleaner and mop. Second, put all those things in
the appropriate place. Third, take and throw all of the rubbish to the trash
can. Fourth, clean the dust and dirt. Fifth, sweep the floor by broom after that
you can also use a vacuum cleaner so that all of the dust can be lost. After
that, grab a bucket of water and mix with a liquid floor cleaner then wet mop
the floor with a mixture of cleaning. Seventh, rubbing it on the floor so the
floor clean of germs and the room can also feel more fragrant and shiny. Then,
wait until the floor be droughty may be about 15 minutes to make sure the room
already be droughty next, you can set the room as your desired. Finally, you can
spray the room with air freshener which you like such as fruits or flowers
scent so that, the room can feel fresher so you can feel comfortable doing
everything in your room.
After I read your post. I think the structure of your paragraph is quiet good. First, from the organization of your paragraph already complete. I can find your topic sentence, time order and transition signals in your paragraph. but, you should remember after used time order and transition signals, these are followed by a comma. example : Second, ....... Then,...... Next, about the grammar and mechanics in your paragraph, I think the capital letters and the spelling are good. but, you did several mistaken when you used too much comma in your first paragraph for example " If you have a party, absolutely after the party your room will be messy and dirty, but don’t worry, just follow my simple methods to clean up messy room after the party." The last about your sentence structure in your paragraph is almost good. :)
ReplyDeletethank lisna.. for your analysis for my writing...
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