Final project of free hugs

Create togetherness by sharing Free hugs

When you feel alone and sad, I think a little thing that you can do is sharing your love to another by free hugs. Probably, the man with the sign “free hugs” was a guy or someone who need love and affection. He wanted to share free hugs to everybody who he met. I think probably in his mind, he wanted to foster a sense of togetherness and peace among other people although they didn’t know each other before. He did it by giving free hugs to everyone he met. I also think he was a nice guy because he was not easily to give up. We can see the man kept his patience and passion to get a hug even though initially no one wanted to hug him. He also tried to keep his smile and kept friendly to everyone who saw him although the other people who saw him, felt he was weird. Initially the atmosphere seemed black and white because no one was care about what had done by the man. The people who saw him also laughed at him, maybe they thought what the man did was a strange thing.

At first, the people did not respond to him and the people did not want to be hugged by him. People might think that man was weird and crazy because he brought the sign "free hugs" while he was walking in the crowd. People might think what he did was a strange thing and not reasonable.

After that, the atmosphere changed to be more colorful when the man walked for a long time then, the man met with a grandmother. The man greeted the grandmother. Next, they hugged each other lovingly. They looked happy when they shared a hug. That’s way the free hugs happened and suddenly, Police banned the man to do free hugs. I think the police forbade him because he did free hugs in public. The people who followed the man’s action to perform free hugs was increasing. Perhaps, the police thought what the man did could disturb the society because of that the police banned it. I think, the police did not know what the purpose of his free hugs campaign. Furthermore, free hugs campaign which done by the man and the people was an illegal action because they had not obtained permission to do it.

Then, when the police tried to stop the free hugs campaign, the man and those who supported free hugs campaign tried to do petition by collecting signatures.  The target of the signatures were 10,000 signatures. At first, they got 83, 136, next 572 signatures, 1850, 2134, 5395 signatures, after that 7840 signatures until they reached their target to get 10,000 signatures, so they got permission to do free hugs campaign.  In the end, all of the people were happy included the police and they shared their hugs with each other. In conclucion, I think by sharing your love with free hugs can create togetherness and show how to make peace among other people although we didn’t know each other. A little or a simple thing such as sharing a hug also taught us to respect each other, appreciate the differences so then by sharing free hugs we can create togetherness.

Wisnu's Free Hugs Campaign

Outline Paragraph "  Free Hugs Campaign " by Wisnu Bayu Temaja

Topic sentence         : People want to share their happiness among the people.

1.      Major supporting sentence 1  : It was followed by another people who want to get a free    hug. (It was followed by another people who wanted to get a free hug)

Minor supporting sentence    1   : They wanted to make free hugs allowed anymore

Minor supporting sentence 2 : Free hugs allowed again by the police and they invited everyone who wanted to get free hugs, including the police. 

Conclude sentence                       : People want to share happiness among the people no matter age, job, or anything else and this is the real form or the real action in sharing happiness to the world.

Grammar                                        : I think there are some mistakes with the grammar, because in your paragraph the tenses that you used is not consistence for example (a lot of question) a lot of questions (people who want to) wanted to (of get signature) of getting (they are looking for ) was looking.

Vocabulary                            : I suggest that the word ‘slipped’ in the sentence they just slipped by around him, probably you can change it by ‘go past, go by or pass.'

Mechanic                             : I think in this sentence “They might think he was unique, strange, odd, or just want to create a sensation, or even worse they thought that guy was crazy. “there are many “comma”. There are already time signals in your paragraph.

Comment in general :

After I read Wisnu's post, I think it is good enough. At the beginning Wisnu tells about the situation around the man with the sign who shares free hugs with each other people even though they don’t know yet each others. There are already time signals in Wisnu's paragraph. But, I think Wisnu can develop his paragraph and makes the paragraph become a little bit longer. I also suggest you that you should be careful with the grammar that you used in your paragraph.

My Room

My Room

Any activities that I do in my room even in dry and rainy season, my room still feels pleasurable. My room is very functional because I can do a lot of things in my room other than to sleep, I can also do other activities such as watching, eating, studying, resting, etc. When I open the door of my room, I always see my pink bed with the large green blanket on the right side of the door. On my bed I usually put some of my dolls to accompany me to sleep and play when I am in my room. I like pink color so the wall of my room is also pink, opposite my bed there is a television which hanging on the wall so I can watch when I feel bored and every times I want. On the left side of the television there is a pink fan which standing with a quiet sound, it can make me feel comfortable and peaceful when I am in my room.  Besides the fan there is a big wooden closets which containing a mirror and my wooden closets color is white, I can make up in front of the mirror and I also can put my clothes in it. Next to the closets there is a desk colored brown for studying, my study desk contains a small closet as a place to put all of my books and my bag and I can do several things with my study desk such as studying, making homework, drawing and also reading even sometimes I eat at my study desk because I usually bring some food from the kitchen to my room.  Above of the study desk there is also a small lamp as a light when I study at night. I like pictures so around of my room there are some pictures of my family and also some paintings which hanging on the wall, it can beautify my room and make the atmosphere more beautiful. So I think my room is pleasurable and functional because many things I can do in my room even in dry and rainy season.

free hugs

Free hugs

After I watched the video first, I thought the man with the sign “free hugs” was a guy or someone who needed a love and affection so that he wanted to share free hugs to everybody who he met and I thought probably in his mind, he thought to foster a sense of togetherness and peace among other people although they didn’t know each other before, so he did it by giving free hugs to everyone he met. Second, I also thought he was a nice and tough guy because he was not easily to give up and not easily to desperate we can see that the man keep patience and passion to get a hug even though initially no one wanted to hug him and he also tried to keep his smile and keep friendly to everyone who saw him although other people who saw him felt he was weird. Initially the atmosphere was like black and white, because no one was care about what is done by the man other than that, the people who saw him also laughed at her, because maybe they thought what he did was a strange thing and at first, the people also did not respond to him and the people did not want to be hugged by him and did not want to give a hug to the man, because people might think that he was weird and crazy because he brought the sign "free hugs" while walking in the crowd and people might think what is done by the man is a strange thing to do or not reasonable.

After that, the atmosphere changed became more colorful because after the man walked in a long time then, the man met with a grandmother and the man greeted the grandmother next, they hugged each other at that time they looked loving each other and they looked happy when they shared a hug, that’s way the free hugs happened and then, Police banned the man to do free hugs. Third, I thought the police forbade him because he did free hugs in public places and the people who followed what is done by the man to perform free hugs increasing number so that, the police might think that what the man did could disturb the public or people as more and more people followed the man action then, this would make the crowd which could interfered the public so that the police forbid it, maybe the police did not know what the purpose of his free hugs did. Other than that, free hugs action which performed by the man and the people included an illegal action because they had not obtained permission to do so.

Next, when the police tried to stop free hugs campaign action then, the man and those who supported free hugs action tried to do petition by collecting signatures as a sign permit application to do free hugs campaign. After that, the police asked the man and the people who supported the man to collect the signature a number of 10,000 signatures to get permission to perform action such free hugs. The target of the signatures were 10,000 signatures, at first they got 83, then 136, next 572 signatures, 1850, 2134, after that 5395 signatures, then 7840 signatures until they could reach their target to get 10,000 signatures, so they got permission to do free hugs campaign. In the end the man and the people got permission to do free hugs campaign finally all of the people were happy included the police and they shared their hugs with each other. The main point of this video, it showed us about how to make a peaceful among others people although we didn’t know each other people yet just by doing a little or simple thing such as by sharing a hug and the video also taught us to respect each other, appreciate the difference so then by sharing free hugs could create togetherness.